Jerry Jones is cryogenically frozen in 2010 and is re-awakened in 2130. 

During the years of his absence, the cowboys have bought out 1/3 of the DNA rights to former teams players. This, along with the cowboys far superior medical technology, allows Jerry to genetically engineer a "super-farve" with superhuman strength.  Using super farve and three evil Barry Sanders clones, the cowboys run an invincible wildcat formation that the league fears will destroy the rest of the NFL.

At first, the last best hope for humanity appears to be the Patriots, whose 2007 Tom Brady is performing at an imhuman level of efficiency.  But, just before the playoffs, it is revealed that Belicheck has been using a robot Brady.  As robots are strictly forbidden from the NFL, the pats are forced to forfeit all of their games and are banned from the playoffs.

Just before the NFC championship, the Bears use their last time machine to bring 1978 Payton back to play against Dallas. 

Without futuristic doping or genetic engineering, Payton is beaten and bloodied by the mutant Dallas  team but is somehow able to match the mighty cowboys score for score.  In an epic battle, through sheer force of will, Payton spends the entire second half of the fourth quarter on a 89 yard drive, scoring the game tying TD as time expires.

But, rather than kick the extra the bears elect to go for 2.  Payton does a signature dive over the line for the WIN, dying hours later from internal injuries.

The sequel will be about the intergalactic war that erupts over the rights to his body, and its precious DNA that holds the secret to defeating all evil.

forte+orton:

today is a preliminary interview with my publicist and editor to see how the book im writing is doing, if it aint doing good well then thats the end of the road. if it goes good i can fix it up and touch it up

the book is about the year 2130 when football is still around.

The plot starts when long time commish mike goode dies, mike was the greatest commish ever and kept all the players in line. Well after he dies  he is replaced by gunther redd and the players start to get out of hand. Well the nfl takes a  great dip in viewers, and profit. Gunther realizes he has to change the league around fast and he cant do it with these players, so Gunther devises a plan. The law is that no person is allowed to bring people from the past by time machine or any other machine. So Gunther starts thinking, would he rather save football or spend years in jail. He chooses the first one. So he quickly starts bringing the greats back to the future. Walter payton, joe montana, dick butkus etc. Well Gunther sends a message to every team telling them that he is holding a huge meeting at a humungous hall. As team representives start filing they are baffled at what they see, great from the games standing on stage. Gunther walks up to podium and annouces the 2130 nfl fantasy draft has begun....................................


I know this has nothing to do with bears football i just need a good luck from some one

Plz no negative comments!

By saying no negative comments you invite them, good luck with the book.

Krieger:

forte+orton:

Krieger:

Mine is actually an A-Biography. I adopted a boy (my son obviously) 15 years ago that had some troubles, I thought he just needed a Dad, love and structure, well he has a list of about 6 illnesses with severe bi-polar and phsycotic tendancies topping the list, and the last 15 years have been one crisis after another. He actualy turns 18 tomorrow. I had been asked to do this before and declined, I guess I feel it is time. Don't mean to hijack your thread.  :)

Go Bears!!!

WHOO!
got approved for another 3 months for touch ups and finishing......................sept will be the final meeting to see if the book will be puublished. i am still going to meet with my editor.

kreiger you didnt hijack the thread, i asked

Congratulations!! How long have you been working on it? Sorry if I missed it.

MilwaukeePhil:

Are the players bigger and faster than they are today? Is cloning allowed?

shuper78:

Jerry Jones is cryogenically frozen in 2010 and is re-awakened in 2130. 

During the years of his absence, the cowboys have bought out 1/3 of the DNA rights to former teams players. This, along with the cowboys far superior medical technology, allows Jerry to genetically engineer a "super-farve" with superhuman strength.  Using super farve and three evil Barry Sanders clones, the cowboys run an invincible wildcat formation that the league fears will destroy the rest of the NFL.

At first, the last best hope for humanity appears to be the Patriots, whose 2007 Tom Brady is performing at an imhuman level of efficiency.  But, just before the playoffs, it is revealed that Belicheck has been using a robot Brady.  As robots are strictly forbidden from the NFL, the pats are forced to forfeit all of their games and are banned from the playoffs.

Just before the NFC championship, the Bears use their last time machine to bring 1978 Payton back to play against Dallas. 

Without futuristic doping or genetic engineering, Payton is beaten and bloodied by the mutant Dallas  team but is somehow able to match the mighty cowboys score for score.  In an epic battle, through sheer force of will, Payton spends the entire second half of the fourth quarter on a 89 yard drive, scoring the game tying TD as time expires.

But, rather than kick the extra the bears elect to go for 2.  Payton does a signature dive over the line for the WIN, dying hours later from internal injuries.

The sequel will be about the intergalactic war that erupts over the rights to his body, and its precious DNA that holds the secret to defeating all evil.

 

forte+orton:

Krieger:

forte+orton:

Krieger:

Mine is actually an A-Biography. I adopted a boy (my son obviously) 15 years ago that had some troubles, I thought he just needed a Dad, love and structure, well he has a list of about 6 illnesses with severe bi-polar and phsycotic tendancies topping the list, and the last 15 years have been one crisis after another. He actualy turns 18 tomorrow. I had been asked to do this before and declined, I guess I feel it is time. Don't mean to hijack your thread.  :)

Go Bears!!!

WHOO!
got approved for another 3 months for touch ups and finishing......................sept will be the final meeting to see if the book will be puublished. i am still going to meet with my editor.

kreiger you didnt hijack the thread, i asked

Congratulations!! How long have you been working on it? Sorry if I missed it.

thanx to all

its been around a year-seems a little short doesnt it

I don't know, I have just began telling my story, and I was told the book wouldn't be done for 2 years which blew me away that it would take that long, but I guess it does. So yeah, you are moving right along. Congrats again. I am still wondering how the money comes. I have been told many diferent things, but the ones that act like they know, really don't. I already feel like I am getting taken advantage of because there has been no real discussion about money yet. I guess I need to ask soon.

Reaper_:

Watching them play over the last 2-3 years was so painful for me that I would actually switch the channel to CBS to watch freaking AFC football with REAL QB's.

forte+orton:

shuper78:

Jerry Jones is cryogenically frozen in 2010 and is re-awakened in 2130. 

During the years of his absence, the cowboys have bought out 1/3 of the DNA rights to former teams players. This, along with the cowboys far superior medical technology, allows Jerry to genetically engineer a "super-farve" with superhuman strength.  Using super farve and three evil Barry Sanders clones, the cowboys run an invincible wildcat formation that the league fears will destroy the rest of the NFL.

At first, the last best hope for humanity appears to be the Patriots, whose 2007 Tom Brady is performing at an imhuman level of efficiency.  But, just before the playoffs, it is revealed that Belicheck has been using a robot Brady.  As robots are strictly forbidden from the NFL, the pats are forced to forfeit all of their games and are banned from the playoffs.

Just before the NFC championship, the Bears use their last time machine to bring 1978 Payton back to play against Dallas. 

Without futuristic doping or genetic engineering, Payton is beaten and bloodied by the mutant Dallas  team but is somehow able to match the mighty cowboys score for score.  In an epic battle, through sheer force of will, Payton spends the entire second half of the fourth quarter on a 89 yard drive, scoring the game tying TD as time expires.

But, rather than kick the extra the bears elect to go for 2.  Payton does a signature dive over the line for the WIN, dying hours later from internal injuries.

The sequel will be about the intergalactic war that erupts over the rights to his body, and its precious DNA that holds the secret to defeating all evil.

 

not sure if thats a shot at me, but its funny

I certainly wasn't taking a shot at you.  When I read your idea, my mind instantly went to, "I wonder what Jerry Jones would do if there were crazy sci-fi technology at his disposal."  I was just offering up a humerous take on the idea.   Having read it again just now, I can see how it can come off as somewhat patronizing which was not my intent at all.  If that is how it was taken then I apologize . . .

I actually think it is an interesting concept.  Good luck!   

shuper78:

forte+orton:

shuper78:

Jerry Jones is cryogenically frozen in 2010 and is re-awakened in 2130. 

During the years of his absence, the cowboys have bought out 1/3 of the DNA rights to former teams players. This, along with the cowboys far superior medical technology, allows Jerry to genetically engineer a "super-farve" with superhuman strength.  Using super farve and three evil Barry Sanders clones, the cowboys run an invincible wildcat formation that the league fears will destroy the rest of the NFL.

At first, the last best hope for humanity appears to be the Patriots, whose 2007 Tom Brady is performing at an imhuman level of efficiency.  But, just before the playoffs, it is revealed that Belicheck has been using a robot Brady.  As robots are strictly forbidden from the NFL, the pats are forced to forfeit all of their games and are banned from the playoffs.

Just before the NFC championship, the Bears use their last time machine to bring 1978 Payton back to play against Dallas. 

Without futuristic doping or genetic engineering, Payton is beaten and bloodied by the mutant Dallas  team but is somehow able to match the mighty cowboys score for score.  In an epic battle, through sheer force of will, Payton spends the entire second half of the fourth quarter on a 89 yard drive, scoring the game tying TD as time expires.

But, rather than kick the extra the bears elect to go for 2.  Payton does a signature dive over the line for the WIN, dying hours later from internal injuries.

The sequel will be about the intergalactic war that erupts over the rights to his body, and its precious DNA that holds the secret to defeating all evil.

 

not sure if thats a shot at me, but its funny

 

I certainly wasn't taking a shot at you.  When I read your idea, my mind instantly went to, "I wonder what Jerry Jones would do if there were crazy sci-fi technology at his disposal."  I was just offering up a humerous take on the idea.   Having read it again just now, I can see how it can come off as somewhat patronizing which was not my intent at all.  If that is how it was taken then I apologize . . .

I actually think it is an interesting concept.  Good luck!   

 

 

 

BearsMod8:

Congrats, had no idea how many talented writers we had here.  Keep us posted and let us know when the book gets published and I will gladly pick up a copy.  Hope to write a novel or two sometime in the future myself, but haven't really practiced a whole lot.  I like your idea for the book and I think it will do well.  Best of luck finishing what you've started.

Sounds like a great concept for a novel, I would be interested in reading it.  Congratulations and good luck, and definitely keep us posted on the progress .

Do you think your position as a Bears fan will aid in your choice of who "the greats" will be?  I don't know that I would be able to hide my preference, lol.

forte+orton:

BearsMod8:

Congrats, had no idea how many talented writers we had here.  Keep us posted and let us know when the book gets published and I will gladly pick up a copy.  Hope to write a novel or two sometime in the future myself, but haven't really practiced a whole lot.  I like your idea for the book and I think it will do well.  Best of luck finishing what you've started.

hey man! i ant taking your congrats YOU PUT ME UNDER MODERATION! lol jk

 And you can see into the future? Dang, now I'm really impressed. :p

BearsMod8:

forte+orton:

BearsMod8:

Congrats, had no idea how many talented writers we had here.  Keep us posted and let us know when the book gets published and I will gladly pick up a copy.  Hope to write a novel or two sometime in the future myself, but haven't really practiced a whole lot.  I like your idea for the book and I think it will do well.  Best of luck finishing what you've started.

hey man! i ant taking your congrats YOU PUT ME UNDER MODERATION! lol jk

 And you can see into the future? Dang, now I'm really impressed. :p

forte+orton:

today is a preliminary interview with my publicist and editor to see how the book im writing is doing, if it aint doing good well then thats the end of the road. if it goes good i can fix it up and touch it up

the book is about the year 2130 when football is still around.

The plot starts when long time commish mike goode dies, mike was the greatest commish ever and kept all the players in line. Well after he dies  he is replaced by gunther redd and the players start to get out of hand. Well the nfl takes a  great dip in viewers, and profit. Gunther realizes he has to change the league around fast and he cant do it with these players, so Gunther devises a plan. The law is that no person is allowed to bring people from the past by time machine or any other machine. So Gunther starts thinking, would he rather save football or spend years in jail. He chooses the first one. So he quickly starts bringing the greats back to the future. Walter payton, joe montana, dick butkus etc. Well Gunther sends a message to every team telling them that he is holding a huge meeting at a humungous hall. As team representives start filing they are baffled at what they see, great from the games standing on stage. Gunther walks up to podium and annouces the 2130 nfl fantasy draft has begun....................................


I know this has nothing to do with bears football i just need a good luck from some one

Plz no negative comments!

I'm an aspiring writer myself, so I'm going to wish you nothing but the best of luck.

On another note;  Have you heard of a writer named Scott Sigler?  He has a novel called THE ROOKIE that follows an intergalactic football league that's WAY into the future.  It's pure sci-fi cheese with alien WRs who can leap 20 feet into the air and what have you.  Pretty fun read (or listen) in my opinion...

daniel_savage:

forte+orton:

today is a preliminary interview with my publicist and editor to see how the book im writing is doing, if it aint doing good well then thats the end of the road. if it goes good i can fix it up and touch it up

the book is about the year 2130 when football is still around.

The plot starts when long time commish mike goode dies, mike was the greatest commish ever and kept all the players in line. Well after he dies  he is replaced by gunther redd and the players start to get out of hand. Well the nfl takes a  great dip in viewers, and profit. Gunther realizes he has to change the league around fast and he cant do it with these players, so Gunther devises a plan. The law is that no person is allowed to bring people from the past by time machine or any other machine. So Gunther starts thinking, would he rather save football or spend years in jail. He chooses the first one. So he quickly starts bringing the greats back to the future. Walter payton, joe montana, dick butkus etc. Well Gunther sends a message to every team telling them that he is holding a huge meeting at a humungous hall. As team representives start filing they are baffled at what they see, great from the games standing on stage. Gunther walks up to podium and annouces the 2130 nfl fantasy draft has begun....................................


I know this has nothing to do with bears football i just need a good luck from some one

Plz no negative comments!

I'm an aspiring writer myself, so I'm going to wish you nothing but the best of luck.

On another note;  Have you heard of a writer named Scott Sigler?  He has a novel called THE ROOKIE that follows an intergalactic football league that's WAY into the future.  It's pure sci-fi cheese with alien WRs who can leap 20 feet into the air and what have you.  Pretty fun read (or listen) in my opinion...

urlhacker:

What does this have to do with Bears football, get out of here man, what are the tackles, like NFL Blitz?

urlhacker:

What does this have to do with Bears football, get out of here man, what are the tackles, like NFL Blitz?

MarylandBear111:

urlhacker:

What does this have to do with Bears football, get out of here man, what are the tackles, like NFL Blitz?

hater. don't read the thread then ace

forte+orton:

MarylandBear111:

urlhacker:

What does this have to do with Bears football, get out of here man, what are the tackles, like NFL Blitz?

hater. don't read the thread then ace

funny av MarylanBear111 would be funny if that was at lambeau field